A Little Black Bird In a Sad, Young Man's Hand - Song Writing

So I wrote a song again. Not a common genre, but my genre. 
Lagunya bercerita tentang seorang laki-laki yang selalu gagal dalam cinta. Terlalu lelah untuk mencoba lagi, namun merindukan kasih sayang dan hati untuk disayangi. Tentang seekor burung yang terluka, tidak mampu terbang lagi, namun merindukan rumah yang entah di mana. Soundcloudnya akan kuupload kalau sudah sempat. Enjoy :)

There's a story about
A little black bird
With broken wings
And a wounded feet
Who knows, who knows
How many miles he has been through
Far away from his home

And there's this sad young man
With a broken heart
Too tired to try again
Who knows, who knows
How many miles he has been through
Longing for someone to be called 'home'

A little black bird in a sad, young man's hand
Both have the same wish in their hearts (to be home)
Too tired, too scattered, to even fly or try again
For they have fall to hard,
And all their hopes are gone
Can't we go home?

So they sat for a while
Healing each other's wound
With no words, only silence
Just knowing that they're not alone

A little black bird in a sad, young man's hand
Both have the same wish in their hearts (to be home)
Too tired, too scattered, but hope has come to live their eyes
Now they can stand
They can jump
And they can fly

Now can we go home?